What do you need now! By Amel
BBANG! Someone knocked on the door. Just as Ben went to open it he herd the smallest worse ever. When he looked down it was a small mouse! He picked it up and put it into a box. Ben ascked him “Do you want to come to the shop’s with me” the mouse said “Yes “. When they got to there Ben asked the mouse “Do you want to help me get the food” he said “Yes” Ben said to the small mouse can you get me apple’s. Mouse said “Now what do you need” nothing said Ben. So they went back home, went to sleep.en. So they went back home, went to sleep.
The long train (Part one)
PEEP PEEEEEEEEEEP! as it had just struck 12am and the long train had left for london at least by one day. “This is going to be bigger then the titanic”
“As if it will callum you will wish on till 3031 for your wish to come true” complained callums asistent joel. Nobody wanted to miss watching the train leave on it’s voyage there was three tickets left to buy or win. Tim was a caffee owner next to the train station so his branch is so busy he could be a trillan air. Tim thort to him self “me and my wife and child could go to london nown in two hours then I better hurry up” “must go then!”
please can you do the end of my story in 80 more word’s and I will make it for my story ending please get bloging
Climate cobs by Jennifer
On the 10 of may class12 and 11 were learning about climate cobs. Some people came in and talked about electricity and how to safe the planet. And at the end of the day we prizes we got stickers and a note book you are busted. And Betty and Jude got a touch because they won at activaty. It is like a excitecs thing.
Outdoor Week 2012 – Tuesday
Outdoor Week 2012 – Monday
Climate Cops At Hotspur
Coming soon…
The three little mice by Kieren
Once upon a time in the and dark woods there where three stubin mice called Josh,Frank & Bob. Josh was the smart one Frank was the cool one & Bob was the cuddly one. And the mice where going to build mouse houses. Bob was going to build his out of straw then 2hours later it was finished then came out a cat then Bob quickly ran into his house then the cat said “come out and have some dinner” said the cat “not by the hair of my ear ear ears” said Bob “well i will scratch your house down and the cat scratched it down and Bob ran away. And Frank builded his house out of sticks and when he built his house the cat appeared again and Frank went into his house and the cat said “Come outside for dinner” ”not by the hair of my ear ear ears” well I will scratch your house down and the cat scratched it down and Frank ran away. And Josh built his house out of bricks then the cat appeared then Bob and Frank ran in whith josh “stay away” said Josh then the cat tryed to scratch the house it didnt work “I will come back” said the cat. THE END
The first sentens of my fariytal my Molly
Once upon a time in sunny side jungle there were three cheaky monkys called miky,niky and riky.
My first sentence to under sea by John
Once upon a time; there was a fish called Nemo; he had two ugly sisters named amber and paige; they classd him as a servint he went to find food and clayn there scals evey day.
what do you think of my first sentence
My first sentence of The fishy smell by Dylan
Once upon a time, in the cold, deep, ocean were titanic sank, lived a rotten, young fish called Skater.
My first sentence for my fairy tale by Jo
Once upon a time, in the dark sweet shop there in the distance sat a swirly thing.
What do you like about my first sentence.
My First sentence Of Flowrella by Frankie
Once upon a time, in an abandond garden centre lived Flowrella, a tiny yet beautiful flower.
What do you think of my first sentence?White cat by Jennifer
Once upon a time, in the dark streets, lived a black and white cat named Bobby.
First sentence for my fairy story by Brandon
Once upon a time,there lived a small raggy tedy called gerald he has one sock and never gets played with.
What do you think of my sentence?
My first sentence of my fairytale by Neusha
Once upon a time in a light world, made of candy, there lived a tatterd girl named Canderrela.
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The first sentince of the sea bed by Amber
Once upon a time there wa.s a slave called Oscer.
My first sentence for Harper the harp by Kaitlyn
Once upon time, in a dark and dusty music room lived an old harp called Harper.
What do you think of my first sentence of my fairy story?
The first sentence of my fairy tale by Jude
Once upon a time there was a young, scruffy fox that lived in the dark woods of England, called Foxy.
What do you think of the first sentence in my fairy story?
My First Sentence Of Prince Ricey by Patrick
Once apon a time, in a small, cramped takeaway shop, there lived a lump of rice named Ricey.
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My first sentence to my story by Betty
Once upon a time under the wet, salty sea, there lived a butifull, younge mermaid called Amelea.
What do you think I need to improve?
What do you think of my first sentence? By Paige
Once upon a time, in a deserted part of the jungle there lived a tiger called Tigger.
Tank the brown fish first sentence by Kieren
Once upon a time, in the deep and dark ocean,where everybody was terrerfied incase a shark came there was a brown and tatterd fish called tank.
The first sentince of Fruit Cocktail Cinderella by Louie
Once apon a time in the deserted, moon lit kitchen sat a green spoty fruit boul in this fruit boul there lay a small green miss treated grape named Sweet.
please coment on what you think of my first sentince.
My first sentece of my fairy tale by Mogtasid
Once upon a time, in the deep and dangerous sea,where no human ever explored, there was a small yet smart squid, his name was Inky.
My first sentence of Bumpy in the Sewers by Amel
Once upon a time, in the dark and dusty sewers of Spain, there lived a crocidile called Bumpy.
What do you think of mu first sentence?
My first sentence of Perfect Paint by Georgie
Once upon a time, in the rotten,dusty shelves of B&Q, where no one ever looked, there lived an ancient, rusty tin of paint named Lilac.
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My first sentence by George
Once upon a time there was a dusty,ancient seat and has a crack on the arm it was named Seaty
My first sentence of my fairy tale by Klaudia
Once upon a time, in the light and sandy cave, lived a young and beautiful meercat, she was called Lily.
What do you think about my first sentence?
